I had given it a shot the first time, when I was in class X... I had also won the first prize for it :) That was the end of it... never tried anything later. Today I felt like getting back this lost passion of mine.. Thanks to the "Creativity" course :) Here's my second one, that I wrote today..
As I lie down beneath the skies in solitude,
I am gazing at the stars, thinking of you
Reminiscing those wonderful moments and the passionate mood,
I wonder if you are thinking of me too…
When we met, I knew there was something about you,
I still remember that friendship, so pure and true.
Never once did I speculate, my Mr. Right, is it you?
I wonder if you are thinking of me too…
I believed our friendship held us strong and close,
That our love bound us and endlessly grew
I was glad that you were the one I chose,
Now I wonder if you are thinking of me too…
Never knew what the days ahead would bring,
I just wished and prayed it would be only you.
An everlasting bond, I was longing!
Now I’m just left wondering, if you are thinking of me too…
--Pratima
Looks like my creativity brims at 12AM in the midnight these days! :)
As I lie down beneath the skies in solitude,
I am gazing at the stars, thinking of you
Reminiscing those wonderful moments and the passionate mood,
I wonder if you are thinking of me too…
When we met, I knew there was something about you,
I still remember that friendship, so pure and true.
Never once did I speculate, my Mr. Right, is it you?
I wonder if you are thinking of me too…
I believed our friendship held us strong and close,
That our love bound us and endlessly grew
I was glad that you were the one I chose,
Now I wonder if you are thinking of me too…
Never knew what the days ahead would bring,
I just wished and prayed it would be only you.
An everlasting bond, I was longing!
Now I’m just left wondering, if you are thinking of me too…
--Pratima
Looks like my creativity brims at 12AM in the midnight these days! :)
9 comments:
u wrote this in class X !?
No No... i wrote this last night.. it was a typo that i mentioned it as a "first" poem here .. sorry! i changed it now...
Anyways.. am sure u must be aware of the poem that I wrote in class X.. dont u remember?
can u post tht one too. public demand [:)]
I dont have it with me and neither do i remember it completely now.. its been almost 9 yrs now! :(
@flickering flame (aka VC).....
yes ofcourse, i wrote it!! it has my name below it :)hard to believe eh? even i couldnt for a while :) and i didnt just cook up something.. thats why maybe ppl told me that it sounds nice
Super cool! You are discovering hidden talents within yourself! Keep writing more poems!
thanx Ani :) do give me some tips.. coz i know u write awesome poems too!!
Really awesome. Gr8 to know that u re-discovered a latent skill in u. Looking fwd to see more poems on this blog! Can we expect more?
ur peom is worth givin a pause for a while frm hectic schedules of life, its really gud
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